She always knew she’d be the one to die.
Ever since she was a child, butterflies landed on the chains that bound her feet as she worked.
She stood with the others before the sacrificial stone. Stained with blood and carved with butterflies, it spoke to the village of fear. Freedom caught mid-flight.
Each girl’s hand held a slip of paper.
One after another, they faced the crowd, lifted their arms. One after another they displayed their papers. Blue ovals.
She unfolded her sheet. Blank.
Today, she would be the reminder. Although they had wings, they would never fly.
The weekly 99-word Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
January 7, prompt: Butterflies & Stones – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about the contrasting prompts butterfly and stones. 🦋
#BlogBattle is a monthly writing prompt for flash fiction/short stories hosted by Rachael Ritchey.
January Prompt: Blank
You went very dark on this one…and it’s terrific!
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Thanks, Liz! 🦋 🖤
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Oh! It’s just short! 🙂 That’s okay. We’re kinda flexible on the length for #blogbattle. 😛 So glad you joined in this month! Happy New Year!
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Yeah, it’s shorter than the rules say it should be. I’m a rebel rule-breaker. 😉 Fun to play at BlogBattle again. Happy New Year!
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V poignant. Up with your best.
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Thank you. This means a lot. 1. It’s been a long time since I wrote one of these. 2. It’s coming from my flash-hero/nemesis Geoff. 🙂 Cheers!
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Wow! This is mega dark … and marvellous!
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Aw, thanks Anne. Where else can you go but dark when the prompt is butterflies? 😉 🦋 🖤 (Or rainbows & unicorns.) Ha!
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Kinda haunting… the second paragraph makes me wonder if maybe she was okay with being chosen.
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Thanks, D. Yeah, I feel like she was okay with being chosen. I mean, not a life-long dream, but still. A resignation, an accepted fate? 🦋 🖤
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That’s how I read it. Fatalistic, the lot of them.
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Thanks, D.
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