The fall of 1978 would be remembered for generations.
I loved the story of the princess woken by a handsome prince. Each year, on Halloween, I became that princess.
I walked alone, trick-or-treating, while groups of guys mocked my dress and made lewd comments. Girls threw rotten apples poisoned with hatred and intolerance.
Mrs. Halloran, who was always kind to me, held a bowl of candy but pulled me aside. She gave me a bright, red apple and a smile.
Our neighborhood lost 27 kids that year. Poisoned. All but the boy in the Snow White costume.
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
August 8 prompt: Poisoned Apple – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story with a poisoned apple.
Brilliantly sinister!
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Thanks!
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Great revelation at the end!
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Thank you!
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Oh boy, I love the twist and that it’s slightly twisted. That Mrs. Halloran steps up in a big way.
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Thanks, D. 😈
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I love it! What a fabulous ending. FYI… I always wanted to dress up like a witch on Halloween! Surprise, surprise. LOL! ❤
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Thanks, Colleen! ❤ What a surprise, you lovely word witch.
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LOL! We’ve been so busy. I’m trying hard to stay in touch with everyone! ❤️❤️❤️
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It’s difficult to do. Don’t try *too* hard and get burn out. Take care of yourself. ❤ (And stay away from the candy!)
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LOL! I’m back on Weight Watchers. 😀 ❤
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Fabuloso, Sarah. Didn’t see that coming!
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Thanks, Anne. Was hoping you wouldn’t. Tough to get those twists right—not too obvious, not too obscure.
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That’s a story true to the Sarah Brentyn mould. So well told, Sarah. Love it!
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Thank you, Norah. ❤ (Yeah, I did get a bit dark with this one, as well. True Brentynesque.)
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Just how I like it. 🙂
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🙂❤️ (Or…🙂🍎)
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Both! 😂
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Excellent!
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Thank you!
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Love the boy in the Snow White costume! Such dark undertones, sparing the one they all bullied.
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Always dark undertones… I’ll have to try a unicorn/rainbow one again. Thanks, Charli. 🦄🌈
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Ha! Rainbows will die and unicorns will shrivel in shadows, jealous of draft horses. 😉 Yeah, I know where you and your fellows will go with unicorns and rainbows! But watch out — it might show up again just for kicks.
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I’d like to argue but I’ve got to be honest and say that’s pretty spot-on. It might be fun to see that show up for a new batch of Ranchers. What will they do with that prompt if they don’t know its past? 🌈 😈 I wonder… Social experiment???
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Yes — a social experiment!
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Chills, Sarah!
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Thanks, Barbara! 😈🍎
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