“No peeking!”
I sighed. “I know, Mirra, I wasn’t going to peek.” Although, that’s exactly what I had been trying to do.
She smirked, took a swig of her mead, and skipped away.
I watched them all, gathered to dance, drink, and watch me stick my hand through a hole in the standing stone. It made me absurdly happy and I wondered what the boy on the other side was feeling.
I would know soon enough, when the druids decided it was time for me to look through the Holed Stone.
They wouldn’t ask what I saw and I wasn’t sure if that was because they considered it private or because they already knew. I took a sip of my drink and relaxed at the sweet, honeyed flavor.
I didn’t notice Mirra was by my side until I felt her breath on my neck. She whispered, “It’s time.” The silence around me now was thick. I knew they were waiting, watching. My life was about to change.
Placing my forehead on the rough sandstone, I gazed through the hole.
“Well?” Mirra tucked a lock of hair behind my ear.
“Water,” I smiled. I had seen rain on this sunny, summer’s day. She nodded and kissed me on the cheek. “He did, as well.”
I slipped my hand through the hole and felt warm, calloused fingers find mine and grasp them.
My #writephoto, a weekly writing prompt for poetry/flash/short stories hosted by Sue Vincent
You are fucking amazing. ๐ I love this.
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๐ What a fantastic comment. Thank you, my talented friend.
#mast ๐
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Well deserved, Lady! #mast ๐
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I enjoyed this piece, Sarah.
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Thanks, Robbie. ๐
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Nice taste of the story…and maybe closer than you might think to the origin of the picture ๐
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I really wanted to do something special with this one but ran out of time. This is the general idea of it, though, so I’m happy.
Thanks for the inspiration. I love the history of this place in your post. Made me desperate to visit. And it does seem possible this could have occurred there. โค
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There is so much more that could be said about this circle, Sarah. Not the biggest, but in many ways one of the best.
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That is the beauty of places like this. They don’t have to be the largest or most well-known (but sometimes they are)… You just never know what space will resonate with you. This one is going on my must-visit list.
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My favourite circle is very small, the stones tiny and unremarkable, but all I can say is that it feels like home…a place I have always known.
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I love it. It had a beautiful old British feel to it. Or is it just because I am an old Brit that I feel that?
J
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๐ Glad it (the story, not you) has that old British feel to it. That’s what I was going for. Well, Celtic, anyway. Thanks, Juliet.
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How sweet. ๐ Wonderful story, Sarah.
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I know, right? It’s kind of sweet. And I’m kind of nauseated by it. ๐ Kidding. (Sort of.) Thank you.
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We can’t always write dark, Sarah. We have to stretch and write sweet romance, too. And it wasn’t sappy and cliched, so well done. ๐
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*stretch* Okay. *yawn* I’m awake. What are we doing?
(Oh, no… I’ll check the Reef rules but I’m pretty sure you’re not allowed to use the “R” word here. *whispers* “romance”.)
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Your story had some R-word in it.
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Interesting interpretation of the photo, Sarah. I know it will always be a unique response from you. Always delightful, even if dark.
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Unique… Yes, I suppose I don’t go the usual route when writing to prompts. Although this one is a far cry from MY usual (dark) with something of a sweet/romantic feel. Yuck! ๐ Thank you, Norah.
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You’re allowed to stray from your dark path into the light occasionally. ๐
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