They have left me here.
Night settles and I am alone. Dawn is far away. But I will wait.
I am dying. My blood is ink, spilling onto the midnight soil, mingling with darkness and mist. I will hold on. I will make it through the night.
To see just one last time…
“Aaron,” she breathes. Her lips brush my forehead. “Gods. No.”
She is crouching next to me. I lift my arm and she grasps my fingers, ignoring the dry, crusted blood caked on my palm and the slick, new blood running down my arm. “Dawn,” I sigh.
I’ve combined two prompts again this week:
#writephoto, a weekly writing prompt for poetry/flash/short stories hosted by Sue Vincent which asks writers to use photos for inspiration (the photo above is this week’s prompt)
and Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch which asks writers to pen a piece in 99 words (this week’s prompt: Dawn).
June 15, 2017 prompt: Dawn – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that symbolically, mythically, mystically, or realistically involves dawn, as a noun or verb. Write about the dawn of time or the time of dawn, or the dawning of an idea.
Nice one.
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Thanks. 🙂
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Intense!
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Thank you!
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Oh Sarah, this is dark – like the darkness before the dawn. I’m not sure that the dawn heralds a new day, though. Masterfully written.
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This dawn is not heralding a new day for Aaron, I’m afraid. But he made it to see his Dawn. Thanks for the kind words. 🙂
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An eerie death at dawn with the blood running down the arm.
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At least he made it. It’s an eerie photo, I think, so I’m glad the writing matched that. Thanks. 🙂
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Love this. Powerful emotion conveyed so starkly. Beautiful.
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Aw, thank you, Lisa. 🙂
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