The windows were nailed shut.
They’d always been. As long as I can remember, at least, and I’m not sure if it was because of me or the girls who lived in this room before.
The pretty, lace curtains might have been there to make up for the fact the windows would never open. Here, girl. Look at the lace and be happy. What is the point of curtains if they can’t billow in the breeze?
The thing about lace, though, is it lets light in. Speckled sunshine rested on the dark, red carpet and, sometimes, if I stood close enough, gave me a spotted glowing feeling on my face. I loved those windows. I hated those windows. They made me feel part of the outside world and were a reminder of everything I could never have.
Here is my attempt at #writephoto, a weekly writing prompt for poetry/flash/short stories hosted by Sue Vincent
Makes me think of flowers in the attic
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Gah! You just gave me the creeps.
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Me too…but then, your piece gave me shivers too…
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Thanks, Sue. Love this photo… It exudes creepiness. 😈 The flash practically wrote itself.
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Nothing wrong with a little ‘creep’ 🙂
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Gah! Me too. They were scary books!
This is both interesting and sad, Sarah. This in particular unsettled me: “Look at the lace and be happy. What is the point of curtains if they can’t billow in the breeze?” And the thought of the girls who lived there before. Creepy. Done well.
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They were creepy books. Yeah, the unmoving curtains to beautify an ugly reality (and thoughts of the girls who were there before)… “Unsettling” is a perfect word for it. Thanks, Norah. ❤
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Sad, poignant, thought-provoking, and *wowser* imagery. Terrific hint fiction once again!
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Ooh… I’m so happy all that showed through in this piece. And thank you! 😊❤
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You. do. this. So. Well!!!! BRILLIANT! #mast ❤
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Hee… Thanks, my friend. #megamast ❤
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Megamast!! 😊💕
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A wistful sadness with a dollop of creepiness on the side – well done.
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Love that description! Thank you. 🙂
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I’m with you. The picture screams ‘don’t look in the wardrobe.’ Your flash leaves the mind tumbling with possibilities of which hope isn’t one!!
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There are so many possibilities here. Though, no, I don’t see hope. Unless it’s in the hope chest in the corner. (*cringe* Sorry. That was bad.)
I do love that photo. 🙂
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It is a rich picture
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Beautiful writing, Sarah, and haunting.
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Thanks, Diana. ❤️
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Wow, great take on this image! I have to admit my mind went somewhere dark when I first saw the image too 😊
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Right? The photo brings up dark thoughts. Of course, it could just be us. Some might think it’s charming and nostalgic. Our take on it is better. 😉 Thanks!
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I blame it on too much Buffy, Supernatural and Stephen King 😉
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Ah! Buffy! 😍 A fellow fan. Gotta love the Scoobies. (That image totally does have a Stephen King vibe going on…)
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Tee hee… the Scoobies. I miss them.
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Excellent response Sarah, I did like your reflections on the room and contents…
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Thanks, Michael. 😊
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Yes! Flowers In The Attic… A creepy piece to go with a creepy photo, Sarah – nicely done, as usual 🙂
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Thanks, Helen. ‘Creepy’ seems to be where it’s at with this one. 😉
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