She woke to a noise. Her brain couldn’t register it. Clinking. No, more of a clattering. That was wasn’t right, either. Rattling. That’s what it was.
“John!” She reached over—his side of the bed was empty.
Slipping out from the covers, she walked to the kitchen. Dark.
“John?” She moved toward the dining room and the rattling grew louder. She heard it clearly as she passed the basement.
Opening the door, she gasped. Her hand flew to her mouth, “John!”
He looked up, eyes wide behind his mask.
The players dropped their dice. The D&D game was over.
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
January 5, 2016 prompt: Rattling In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a rattling sound. It can be an intimidating sound of protest, a disorienting loud sound, a musical expression or a gentle baby’s toy. Go where the prompt leads you.
* Just having a bit of fun. Much love to my geeky gaming friends.
Pfffsssfftttffsstt! Haha! (Coffee spewing, followed by LOLing)
Great build up and hilarious, *unexpected* ending. 😀
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Awesome. 😄 Always happy to have people spitting out their coffee laughing. Thanks!
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Ha! Next time she needs to join the adventure! Great unfolding mystery!
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Thanks. 🙂
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Great twist, Sarah. I wasn’t expecting it at all. D&D players can be very scary though! And the sound of those dice – ooooh! 🙂
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Oh, I know. Those dice can be scary… 😉
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