“Long day at work?” She brushed some snow off his coat.
He reached for her pinky, lifting it to his lips and kissing her hand. “It was,” he looked past her to the fireplace, “interesting.”
“As always,” she laughed.
“As always, my dear.”
She led him to the fire where she had set a blanket and two glasses of wine.
Curling up in the warmth, he placed his head on her lap. “Perfect,” he murmured.
Stroking his hair, she thought about their love, how easy it all was, how they never discussed the fact her husband was a hitman.
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
December 29, 2016 prompt: Cozy In 99 words (no more, no less) write a cozy story. A character might long to feel cozy, or you might describe the perfect cozy scene.
Ahhh… such a cozy, idyllic scene.
And then comes the abrupt scratching of the record. 😀
Well done!
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That’s awesome! “The scratching of the record.” I love it. ❤️ Thanks!
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Heh….brilliant as always, Sarah. I love these little windows. ❤ #mast
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Thanks, Eric. Little windows… Into lives or my mind? Hmm. Perhaps both. ❤️ #mast
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Definitely both!!! #mast ❤
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Told you you were the consummate exponent of the art of flash and yet more proof. Sublime
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Wow. That there is high praise, sir. (Are you quite sure you meant to leave it here?) Thanks, Geoff. ❤️ You are so wonderfully supportive of my writing. I won’t let it go to my head.
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Just a little swelling is good you know. Especially around the head.
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😊
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Love the twist at the end! A perfectly exciting cozy story. 🙂
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I do love those twists. So fun. “Exciting” and “cozy” are two words I wouldn’t have put together and yet they work so well. 🙂 Thanks!
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Such a great opening of possibilities! 😀
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Ooh… What possibilities lie in this relationship? So many… ❤️
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So so many. 😀
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Brilliant twist on hygge! Even hitmen and their wives seek comfort at the end of the day.
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Indeed. I mean, honestly, someone’s got to do it. And he needs a cozy home as much as the next guy! 😂
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So what do you think a hitman likes to watch to unwind?
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This guy likes reruns of Perry Mason.
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That’s classic!
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That’s a vicious twist, Ms Brentyn – you can always be relied on to subvert cosy!
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Haha! I turned it on its arse, did I? It felt like a beautifully cozy scene to me. 🥂❤ Lovebirds. I guess that’s the closest I’ll ever get to writing a romance.
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Chilly in spite of the cosy atmosphere 🙂
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Chilly wine? 🥂❤
It feels a bit romantic. Or I’m a bit twisted. Eh. Either way.
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Was he the husband? Oh dear I thought he was the lover and imagined the husband killing them both. I’m so twisted😂
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Yes! I love that take! That’s the new story. 😂 I love your twistedness!
(Also, thank you for pointing out one of my favorite things about flash. It belongs to the reader.)
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Excellent twist.
It’s a ‘Hit!’
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A hit. Nice one. 😀 Thanks!
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I agree with everyone, Sarah. Fabulous story – set us up for a lovely cosy evening, then hit us with a twist! Superb! You do it so well. I love it!
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Thanks, Norah. ❤ It was fun. It always is… 🙂
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I was thinking lawyer all the way! WOW!!!
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I am resisting the lawyer jokes. It’s painful. 😉 Thanks.
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Wait, WHAT? Cracking twist, cracking. Did NOT see that coming.
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I love when that happens. 😀 Thanks!
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