Fingertips touching, never leaving, they dance.
Round the circle ringed with stones, embers glowing, wind blowing, they move.
Hair whipping, voices crackling, they sing.
Calling for the flames to grow, fire curling, stars fading, they twirl.
Towering bonfire casting shadows…shifting…
Faces alight, flickering rust and gold…features rearranging…
They are ancient. Forgotten. Lifeless.
They are born. Pulsing. Alive.
On the damp beach, atop the cliff, in the forest, the desert, the mountains, marshes, plains, valleys…
They are everywhere and nowhere. They are here.
Summoned.
To this place. Our home.
Beasts.
Fingertips touching. Dancing on our bones. Frolicking through the ruins.
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
November 17, 2016 prompt: Fire – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that is told around a campfire. It can be a bonfire, burning trash can, a fire pit, something flaming outdoors. Who is gathered and listening?
WOW! amazing, Sarah! I definitely get a druidic vibe from this…feels shamanic. Love it!
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Thank you, sir. #mast ❤
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Love this: ‘They are everywhere and nowhere. They are here’ Poetic this Sarah, feels wild and untamed… ❤
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Oh, I love this comment! Poetic, wild, untamed… ❤ 🙂 Thank you!
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All three…so it is…love it! 🙂 ❤
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I love the poetry of this one, Sarah. Your repetitious sentence structures leads us gently; we follow, entranced by your words. You do this other-worldly thing rather well (just to be totally expressive!) The images you create are magic. If I had to choose, maybe this one: “Faces alight, flickering rust and gold…features rearranging…”
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Aw, yay! Thanks, Norah. 💕 I should have known you’d notice the sentence structure. I tried… So happy that worked for you.
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🙂
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It makes me think of ancient vibes we think we’ve overcome with modernity. An ongoing dance in the spiritual realm, then beasts summoned. 2016 politics.
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We never really overcome our ancient ways with modern comforts. It’s an ongoing dance for sure.
(Summoned beasts…politics…hmm…sounds on target.)
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