We danced in moonlight
Amber autumn leaves twirling
Cool breezes rush in
Laughter fades as we see loss
In time, winter takes our dance
Here’s another attempt at Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday challenge. As I’ve said, poetry is not my thing. But I do love a challenge and this week is writing a Tanka poem (5/7/5/7/7) with the words ‘time’ & ‘laughter’ in it.
Lemon Shark Reef 
Lovely, Sarah! #mast 💙
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Thanks, my friend. #mast ❤️
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Oh, that is lovely. The last line is especially perfect! Well done! ❤
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Thank you! ❤️ These are fun challenges.
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Thanks. I’m so glad you are enjoying! ❤
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Aah, I love this. A slice of like, nicely done.
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A slice of like. I like that! 🙂
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Well I’m impressed, I can’t even write a Haiku!
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Well neither can I. Not well. Poetry is not my thing. But I do love a challenge, you know. 😉 Thanks.
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