My name is Red.
As in the crimson ribbons that will flow from your flesh when my razor-sharp weapon lashes out.
I watch the woman unleash a storm of violence with her sword and a smile.
I will fight alongside her.
She moves like a sharp-shinned hawk, majestic and agile. Like me.
She is deadly beauty.
I wait for her to notice me. To appreciate my brutality in battle. To take me under her wing.
She turns, red hair flying free in the salty air. My heart soars.
A laugh escapes her lips as she says, “Polly wanna cracker?”
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
* This fun, little flash was prompted in two ways by Charli this week. One. I am using her prompt from Carrot Ranch. Two. She suggested I use a female pirate character I’ve written about previously and include a parrot (who thinks he is a raptor). 🙂
October 19, 2016 prompt: Raptor – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes a raptor. Let your imagination take wing, or dive into natural science. Tell a story about flight, talons or tail-feathers. Create a myth or share a BOTS (based on a true story). Set the raptor in a spectacular place or focus on bird itself. And for clarification, raptors are eagles, hawks, falcons and owls.
You have met the challenge well. I love the thought of the red hair flying. But then, I’m biased.
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It was not an easy challenge to meet! But a fun one.
You’re allowed to be biased about red-haired pirates. You could be Anne Bonny for Halloween. 😄
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Actually my gorgeous little red-haired granddaughter has gone to a Halloween party tonight dressed as a pirate. She looks soooooo cute!! Yes, I know. I am biased. And happily so. 🙂
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Really great!
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Thanks! 😄
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Great, fun story! Gave me a big smile.
I love this parrot even more than the pirate — he’s so feisty and confident! 🙂
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No. My pirate is so awesome!
A feisty, confident parrot! 😄 I’m laughing so much about this parrot who thinks he’s a hawk. I think there’s a longer story here. I wish I could draw.
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ha!!!
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😀
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Love this Sarah…LOVE this: ‘She moves like a sharp-shinned hawk, majestic and agile. Like me.’ Great to read you again my friend – been too long… ❤
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Sherri! 💕 Missed you, lovely lady. Ha! Yes, deadly parrot. Thanks.
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Missed you too dear one! Deadly parrot is brilliant… ❤
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Ooooh, Sarah! I was hoping…and this far exceeded all I could hope for from you! I love the flow of battle-violence, the scrap of images I see flash and the heartache of the pirate’s companion, unappreciated raptor. 😀
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Ha! “unappreciated raptor” Yes, that’s my little parrot. No one appreciates him. 😉
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