She was beautiful.
Stunning.
He watched the ice melt in his glass, swirling the whiskey around, just to avoid staring at her.
“Another?” The bartender held up a bottle.
He raised an eyebrow and slid his glass across the bar. “What do you think?”
“Me?” The woman walked over. “I think you drink too much.”
“Yeah? What the hell do you know.”
“I know you’re here every day,” she looked toward the dining room. “I waitress.”
He wanted to tell her to get lost.
Instead, he asked her to join him.
“Absolutely,” she smiled, “but I don’t drink.”
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
May 25, 2016 prompt: Smile – In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that changes with a smile. It can be a character, tone, setting or any creative use of smile.
My attempt at an upbeat, “smiley” post for Charli and the Rough Writers. ๐
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I like that you are able to catch “mundane” instances of every day life and make them interesting and I want to know more…….. (hint) …. (hint) …. #mast โค
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You know, dear, these challenges are 99 words. (No more. No less.) Thank you. #mast โค๏ธ
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But…but……*sigh*
Ok. ๐ โค Wonderful again, Sarah! #mast
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It is upbeat! She’d obviously been checking him out. She wasn’t there for a drink! I hope it works well for them. I won’t read anything sinister into her intent! ๐
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No sinister intentions. They will live happily ever after in blissful sobriety. (For now…bwah-ha-ha!) What? Who said that? ๐
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But of course. I was the one questioning the integrity of the apple tarts! Suspicious mind – that’s me! ๐
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Great dialogue, Sarah!
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Thanks! โค๏ธ
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What an image. Well done. I’m sure there’s room for “the dark side” yet to come ๐
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Thank you. ๐ And, yes, the dark side will lure me sooner rather than later.
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Mutual surreptitious looking. Lets hope he can now stop drinking — she should have approached him earlier (before he developed a habit) LOL. Nice flash Sarah.
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Thanks, Irene. Yes. Mutual “looking.” โค ๐ โค Unfortunately, I think he'd developed that habit long before he frequented the bar…
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liked this a lot – I kind of feel it might have a happy ending… especially if she was a drinker too. I like this story. a lot โค
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Thanks. โค Yeah, it's a happy ending, joyous, smiley flash. Just for this week… ๐
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Upbeat works for me! Great flash Sarah. ๐
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Thanks, Kate. Glad it worked. ๐ Smiles!
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