I stood on the cliff, barefoot and bikini-clad.
Glaring at the other kids until I was satisfied they wouldn’t push me, I peeked over the edge.
Sheer rock, straight down. Grey granite sinking into dull green water.
Two boulders with a small gap of ocean in between marked my destination.
I stepped back and blew out a breath. “That’s fucking high. Like, really high.”
“Yeah,” Jim backed away. “Ladies first.”
I rolled my eyes. “You’re kidding.”
“Nope.”
“Nice,” I stared him down. “Wait. You’re not jumping, are you?”
“Nope.”
“Fine,” I threw my towel at him, sprinted, and jumped.
Flash Fiction Challenge over at Carrot Ranch
March 23, 2016 prompt: Adventure – In 99 words (no more, no less) tell about an adventure experienced or witnessed.
This week, the challenge was more of a flash nonfiction. I was 15 years old and the only girl of the group to jump. #truestory
I shamelessly stole this title from a line in The Princess Bride (one of my favorite movies).
INCONCEIVABLE!
This is great, Sarah. 😉 ❤
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You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means. ❤️ Thanks.
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You’re welcome! ❤
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Wicked love a girl with more balls than a bloke!
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Thought you might like this. (He never did jump and also never heard the end of it.) 😘
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All I can say is: I’m pleased it’s written in the first person. I know “you” survived. Crazy though! Too many tragedies happen this way, with probably as little thought in the process as what you have portrayed. Well done!
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It was crazy. And stupid. There was little to no thought put into this. I can tell you that.
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Hmm. Brave girl though! I’m glad you survived. 🙂
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Oh, I should have read your note before commenting. I really am pleased YOU survived!
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Haha! That must have been weird to read. 💙 Well, I do often write my fiction in first person so how would you know?
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Exactly! 🙂 But I should read the whole post! 🙂
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Great Flash!
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Thanks, Susan. 😀 I’ll have to check out the ranch to see who played this week. Hope you did!
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Great flash Sarah. Perhaps you should write non-fiction more often. Had a great edge to it. I can believe that he never lived it down but glad you lived to tell the tale.
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I see what you did there. Had an “edge” to it. Awesome. 💙 Thanks, Irene. Perhaps I will write more nonfiction. I love when memories read like fiction. (But I do love my fictional characters…)
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A challenge surpassed, nicely done balsy lady.
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Ha! Thanks! 😀
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Wow! And this is true! What a plunge that must have been and way to take the challenge. 😀
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It was quite the plunge. VERY high. (And, yes, sorry about that…I completely misunderstood and thought it was supposed to be a BOTS. Well. I certainly had fun baring that bit of myself.) 😉
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