His voice rose in pitch
Like the time he stole my trust
Crushing me with tone
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We’re trapped in the lift
This is the time! Pitch your book!
Make an appointment
This is part of a weekly haiku writing challenge which must be written in the English form of 5-7-5.
Hosted by RonovanWrites
#45 Prompt: Write a haiku using the words “pitch” and “time”
Lemon Shark Reef 
Had a bit of fun with this challenge. 🙂 The second poem — couldn’t help myself.
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Similar indeed; how could I not love it? 🙂
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Right? I’m wondering how different all the poems are going to be with this prompt. So many meanings… Thanks!
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I think half the fun is seeing everyone else’s take on the same prompt. And you’re very welcome. 🙂
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‘Pitch’ has so many meanings doesn’t it – fabulous prompt words this week. Great that you have gone with two such different haiku.
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It really does. I’m looking forward to the compilation. Thanks!
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These are very different but I loved both. The first one has a somber tone and I can relate, and the second, made me laugh. Awesome! 😀
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Thank you. 🙂 Definitely different pieces. The challenges are too fun — I could write five with some of these prompt words.
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One serious, one light, both with unwanted endings. And both very good. 🙂
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I couldn’t decide. Had to include both. Thanks! 🙂
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What can I say. I love them. The last one made me smile. 😊
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Thank you! 🙂
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You’re welcome.
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